【今年的大学英语四级作文onlineshopping我想估一下分,nowadays,withtherapidoftheinternet,shoppingonlineisbecomingafasion,especiallyamongtheyoung.Ibelievethatmanyfactorscontributedtothewidespreadofonlineshopping.Fi】

今年的大学英语四级作文onlineshopping我想估一下分,

nowadays,withtherapidoftheinternet,shoppingonlineisbecomingafasion,especiallyamongtheyoung.

Ibelievethatmanyfactorscontributedtothewidespreadofonlineshopping.Firstly,itisconvenientforpeopletobuythegoodsandtheydon'tneedtogooutsidetoseachthegoodsinshopsonebyonesothatsavetheirtime.Secondly,thegoodssellsontheinternetischeaperthaninshops,itcansavetheirmuchmoney.However,shoppingonlinecanalsobepotentiallydangerious.sincethebuyerandthesellerdonotneedtodealwithface-to-face,thequalityofthegoodscan'tbeguaranteed,andthegoodsmaybedamagedduringthedelively.

Frommypiontofview,shoppingonlineisatrendandweshouldnotbeprohibited.Butweshouldbecarefulwhileusingitandthegovernmentshouldbetakesomemeasuresmakeitperfect.

顺便帮我看一下这个作文的语法什么的问题,我英语基础不够好